Throughout this grand design of things you’ll get an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where you misplaced us was first in your details. As people say, the devil is in the details… And that could not be much more accurate right here. Having said that, let me inform you what did give good results. Your writing is highly engaging and this is possibly the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can easily see the jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily certain of how you seem to connect your details that make your final result. For right now I shall yield to your position but wish in the future you connect your dots much better.